Thread:Ursuul/@comment-29771477-20170503000404/@comment-29771477-20170504220733

@SR: Good smg start. I'm sure she would approve.

@Ursuul:

How about....


 * Change ameliorate to something most people would not have to google


 * Change periphery to something more simple, like lead

and perhaps


 * Change in conjunction with to along with

Accuracy is very important, but clarity and unbias make the accounts look accurate.