Thread:Ursuul/@comment-29771477-20170616133250/@comment-28083312-20170616140104

Change, “There is not a single point here that is inaccurate or hyperbolic” to “There is not a single point here that is hyperbolic”. Also change “This is a worrisome fact, given that these scientists are some of the leading scientists in the world.” to “This is a worrisome fact, given that these scientists are the leading specialists in their field worldwide.” Lastly change “bad as any dystopian sci-fi writer has imagined” to “bad as any dystopian science fiction author has ever imagined”. Of course, in real life, it would be far too late to do anything at that point but to acclimate to the change instead of attempting to stop it, but it’s otherwise real enough. Good job.