User blog comment:II Finale II/If you were a Square(Diep.io Fanfic)/@comment-30047050-20161024120707

Maybe, instead of "Aha, the Defender. He is one of the only bosses that do not actually rule over anything. We shall gain his trust. And we shall be his.", maybe you could put "At least that's what we thought long ago. And then the Defender appeared. So far, he has not seen that we want to help him in his conquest. And so, we shall gain his trust. And so, we shall be his."